Sunday, November 15, 2015

TOW 9- One Bouquet of Fleeting Beauty, Please


            The standard gift for any celebration-worthy event is a bouquet of flowers. Alisha Gordner, a flower-shop worker and writer, discusses the relationship between her and her customers. In her article, “One Bouquet of Fleeting Beauty, Please,” Alisha Gordner shares personal anecdotes and an emotion-packed conclusive sentence to force her readers to recognize the silver lining in the fleeting cloud of impermanence.

            Gordner begins by telling her readers about some of the amazing people she has met and the messages they attach to the bouquets they buy. She asserts that she would “scoff at messages that seemed too sugary, trite or boring” but still recognizes the significance of “the gesture,” because when her boyfriend committed suicide, “people sent cards.” This woeful tale adds to the credibility of her message by showing she has experience with these things. It also appeals to pathos by allowing her readers to feel sympathy for her, which will make her message stick in their minds because her story will stick there, too. The story of her experience in losing her boyfriend shows her message in action. She shares many “precious moments made all the more precious by the fact that they have already come and gone” and acknowledges that there are memories that have blurred over time. She justifies the fading of these memories by recognizing that “there would always be more,” ultimately showing her readers how extremely natural change is. In the conclusion of her article, Gordner shares her favorite flower, the “tulip magnolia,” which only blooms for “a matter of weeks.” A woman who works with flowers chooses a flower with a fleeting presence as her favorite. This sentiment effectively concludes her argument and shows her readers “how startlingly beautiful impermanence can be.”

            Overall, Gordner’s strong conclusive sentence and personal anecdotes effectively show her readers the perfection in impermanence. Gordner’s message should remain in our minds, too. We often dwell on the details and try to memorize our memories, when in reality we should be looking forward to the details that are yet to come. Oh, there is so much to look forward to, we just don’t know the exact details of it all… and maybe we never will… and that is OK.

 

           

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